As far as I can see,
For most of it that I hear
I know I'm here,
For there isn't another place
where I should be, or maybe there is...
Considering that one believes
I am,
But maybe I am not,
I can't be certain, until you
observe
I’m not quizzical, that’s just what
certain Physics portrays
I feel, I yearn, I crave
There’s a loop after loop, and
in one there are many, and many more from there
Skewed in normal geometry,
Like an unfair dimensional
play
The agony of loops, in my
being, remain astray
They could but perhaps
never lend reason,
Conflicts that arise in my pre-frontal
cortex and limbic system,alike yet differently
Like open ends of a infinite
straight chain,
One yields, the other casually
denies
Layers build one after the other,
Structured in parallel and
anti-parallel routines,
Almost like a second nature to them
So there is one, where I exist
And then there are many, where
I may or may not be
In loops, and layers,in
dimensions(one or many)
That you will see only if you
observe
And perhaps make me be.
The poem starts with a certain simplicity, and then unfolds to show many layers. I think that sums up all critical appreciation to this awesome work! Very fresh and super creative. Abstract with certain grounded qualities. Cool stuff!
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